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Is There True Love.


Is There True Love?
The kind that gets underneath your skin,
That makes the world go up or down,
That completes everything.

Does it actually make you insane?
Borderline upon Love and Hate,
Can it make you cry and lust?
Feeling like everything is a must,
Never wanting to let go,
Making everything deeper then it is.

Is There such a thing as Love?
The kind that fills you everywhere,
Making you possessive of  your lover,
Making everything you do last forever,
Replaying in your mind the moments that slowed in time,
Your First kiss,
Your First hug,
The First I love you.

Now Tell me really is There such a thing as True Love?
©2008-2009 *MeltingWaterMelons
:iconmeltingwatermelons:

Author's Comments

This is a poem written for :icondeltabeta: *Deltabeta, and only for him. I give him permission to post this on his account, but he has to put my name in the Artist's Comments.

Your Welcome, :icondeltabeta:, :hug: :glomp:

The theme was "Is There True Love?."
I think i did awesome and good on this one, i made it simple and sweet with questions about the feelings you usally get with love . :D

This is for, [link]
people who want free poems like this, have too comment and soon before all five spots are filled.

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:iconcroattica:
i really like it :)

tell me, do you write from your experience or instincts? because it seems when i read as if you went through all of which you write :)

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~Can love, as a feeling, be so strong, that it can turn one into a beast?~

,,..--^^°°˘˘ˇˇ˘˘°°^^--..,,

Dante knows Shit about crying.
:icondeltabeta:
Yes there is such a thing as true love!!! This is brilliant! THANKS SO MUCH!!! Haha. I'm so happy I cried. wow...I'm a guy (almost 20 yrs old) and I cried...Thats how good this was. Thank you.

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I've left DeviantArt Because of this: [link]
:iconmeltingwatermelons:
Thank you. I tried to make it just for you and i guess it worked. I imaged most of it, but it all came though. :D :hug:

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(Two of the most hilarious Quotes)
(Draco sighed and then chuckled wryly. "I should write romance novels," he muttered.)-Draco Malfoy
("Note to self," Neville said seemingly taking Harry's words at face value; "don't look at Malfoy.")-Neville Longbotte
:iconmeltingwatermelons:
And your welcome. I'm glad it made you happy. :D :hug:

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(Two of the most hilarious Quotes)
(Draco sighed and then chuckled wryly. "I should write romance novels," he muttered.)-Draco Malfoy
("Note to self," Neville said seemingly taking Harry's words at face value; "don't look at Malfoy.")-Neville Longbotte
:iconmeltingwatermelons:
Actually i haven't gone thought most of which i write it just sounds like it. :D I Really just have a awesome imagination. :D :hug: And Thank you. :D :hug:

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(Two of the most hilarious Quotes)
(Draco sighed and then chuckled wryly. "I should write romance novels," he muttered.)-Draco Malfoy
("Note to self," Neville said seemingly taking Harry's words at face value; "don't look at Malfoy.")-Neville Longbotte
:iconcroattica:
it seems you really do :D
no problem :hug:

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~Can love, as a feeling, be so strong, that it can turn one into a beast?~

,,..--^^°°˘˘ˇˇ˘˘°°^^--..,,

Dante knows Shit about crying.
:iconwildfire2003:
Aww, this is wonderful and sweet and all that mushy stuff:clap:

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Live as you breathe, free.
Sticks and stones may break some bones but words cause permanent damage.
If they are bad mouthing me behind my back, you better believe they are bad mouthing you behind yours too.
:iconmeltingwatermelons:
Thank you, i tried to make it like that. :D :hug:

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(Two of the most hilarious Quotes)
(Draco sighed and then chuckled wryly. "I should write romance novels," he muttered.)-Draco Malfoy
("Note to self," Neville said seemingly taking Harry's words at face value; "don't look at Malfoy.")-Neville Longbotte
:iconmeltingwatermelons:
:D :hug: :hug: :D

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(Two of the most hilarious Quotes)
(Draco sighed and then chuckled wryly. "I should write romance novels," he muttered.)-Draco Malfoy
("Note to self," Neville said seemingly taking Harry's words at face value; "don't look at Malfoy.")-Neville Longbotte

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