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Songs Of A Broken World.


Small crimes full of destruction,
Simple things never enough,
Fighting to survive,
Yet killed for my skin color,
I have always been in the middle of a war,
Trying to survive,
I learn to adapt,
I learn to think,
I learn to walk away.

Making me wish i wasn't this color,
Marking me for something i had no part of,
History is going to reapeat itself,
And i couldn't stop it,
I learn to dance to my own tune,
I make myself what i want,
And i am who i am,
Please don't see the facade,
See what's underneath.

Play my violin,
Read it's notes into my skin,
And let it mark the words,
I embrace,
I will face what i can,
See me in this sad lonely tune,
That makes the tears seep from your eyes,
I shall disguise myself,
Until you hear my song,
And listen to the words,
That haunt everyone.

Because...
I am a song waiting to be listened too,
Just hear my words,
And wish you could save me,
When i can't even save myself.
©2008-2009 *MeltingWaterMelons
:iconmeltingwatermelons:

Author's Comments

Why are people soo against other people? Why are there racists? I can't answer. I just feel like everything i do is watched, if i look the wrong way at someone or feel like someone is thwarting me, But because I'm white, i can't doo anything. I feel sorry for myself. Why could i be Blue? Or Silver? Or Red?

But........ Hello everyone thanks for reading, and don't make me bring you down with my rant.

It was inspired from a couple of songs. Breathe No More, Evenesence. The End, Dead-My Chemical Romance, Bon Jovi - It's My Life.

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:iconlpfanxtreme:
A couple=2, You listed 4. LOL

Anyways, it's a great poem. You're obviously going through the "Why do people do this? This is wrong! What's wrong with them?" phase. Trust me, everyone does at one time or another. ;)

I liked it a lot, it was unique, and it was able to personify as a song as a person. Woot!
:iconmeltingwatermelons:
Thank you. :D :hug:

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(Two of the most hilarious Quotes)
(Draco sighed and then chuckled wryly. "I should write romance novels," he muttered.)-Draco Malfoy
("Note to self," Neville said seemingly taking Harry's words at face value; "don't look at Malfoy.")-Neville Longbotte
:iconmeltingwatermelons:
:D :blackrose:

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(Two of the most hilarious Quotes)
(Draco sighed and then chuckled wryly. "I should write romance novels," he muttered.)-Draco Malfoy
("Note to self," Neville said seemingly taking Harry's words at face value; "don't look at Malfoy.")-Neville Longbotte
:iconnuisance15:
Very wonderful... It's got good flow to it! Excellent work as always, my dear. This one really reaches the heart. ^.^
:hug:
~M

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♥♥♥Merryde Anne♥♥♥

1st Corinthians 13:13
But the greatest of these is love...

Can you love as HE loves?

♥♥♥Merryde Anne♥♥♥
:iconmeltingwatermelons:
Thank you, :D Yea i really tried to make it flow, and it worked. :D :hug: :hug:

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(Two of the most hilarious Quotes)
(Draco sighed and then chuckled wryly. "I should write romance novels," he muttered.)-Draco Malfoy
("Note to self," Neville said seemingly taking Harry's words at face value; "don't look at Malfoy.")-Neville Longbotte
:iconscarysolstice:
So beautiful. So sad. And yet there is hope. In a hopeless world. Strong emotion. Strong words. Such poems are needed.

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:iconmeltingwatermelons:
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it that much. Yes we need such poems in this world thats why i write them. :D :hug: :hug:

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“Everyone I love dies violently … unnaturally. I'm cursed! Why go on? I'll just hurt others.”---Alice from American McGee's Alice
“If ignorance is bliss, I must be ecstatic.”----Alice from American McGee's Alice
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:nod: :glomp:

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